UC MERCED
WRI 116: Writing in the Natural Sciences
Section 6
Hybrid Class
Monday Tuesday Wednesday
10:00 to 11:20
plus online time
COB 261
Name: Dr. Shirley Kahlert
Office Hours: Mondays 11:20 to to 12:20
Office: COB 394 12
Email: skahlert@ucmerced.edu
Phone: 228 3022 Use email whenever possible.
COURSE DESCRIPTION
Scientific discourse is a highly specialized means of communicating complex, often technical information. The Natural Sciences is an inclusive field that spans issues related to biology, medicine, epidemiology, psychiatry, nutrition, genetics, technology, chemistry, engineering,physics, and earth science, to name but a few. Some variation occurs across disciplines of the natural sciences, and this discourse is typically research-based and intended for publication in scholarly journals or for presentation at academic conferences. Its written format can include abstracts, research reviews, project proposals, technical reports, press releases and journal articles, each requiring a thorough understanding of stylistic and explanatory conventions within a discipline.
This course provides intensive practice in the presentation of scientific subject matter in research and public policy. We will consider the range of audiences to which scientific communities respond, and explore respective variations in substance, style, focus, arrangement, logic, and rhetoric. Above all, we will explore means of communicating and applying specialized knowledge to a wider public. Thus, we will (1) identify the rhetorical principles and conventions of scientific writing; (2) consider representative texts from the field that represent a variety of styles and communities; (3) explore the rhetorical challenges that scientists face when communicating among themselves and with the public; and (4) practice common research reporting paradigms.
STUDENT LEARNING OUTCOMES
Students will practice and refine their capacity, either through in-class interactions or online activities, to:
- synthesize and express complex ideas
- represent technical information in clear oral and written, including online, presentations
- understand scientific problems in current and historical contexts
- revise writing by incorporating relevant advice for improvements
- collaborate successfully on group tasks and class projects, including on line collaboration
- demonstrate information literacy and be able to work with evidence
- explore, articulate and apply scientific interests from college coursework
In short, you will learn to establish your credibility as a scientist by understanding the conventions of science writing ,to present your research to the public in a way that the public can understand, and demonstrate your ability to collaborate with others in your field.
PORTFOLIOS
http://writing116writinginthenaturalsciences.pbworks.com/w/page/29749368/Portfolio-Guidlelines
How well you reach these outcomes will be measured by your achievements on individual assignments, class participation, and your e-portfolio. Be sure that you understand you to present the evidence for your performance in your portfolio at the beginning of the semester, for it is your task to demonstrate that you've been successful in meeting the following outcomes:
- Ethics
- Craft
- Rhetoric
- Collaboration
Your e-portfolio is a semester long account of your journey as a science writer, so be sure that you are working on it throughout the semester. It is worth one fifth of your grade, so avoid unpleasant surprises by keeping track of your metadiscourse, of your insights, of your achievements throughout the semester.
GRADES
Blogs 10% * (ten blogs each scored individually)
Assignment 1: Statement of Purpose 10%
Assignment 2: Technical Explanation 10%
Assignment 3: Annotated Bibliography 05%
Assignment 4: Research Review and matrix 15%
Assignment 5: Collaborative Prospectus 10% *
Assignment 6: Oral Presentations 10%
Assignment 7: Portfolio 20%*
Class and group participation 10%*
*These assignments will have a heavy online component.
CLASSROOM
As a hybrid course, our class meets in-person and online via our course UCMCROPS website. That means that we have extended our classroom to include the digital UCMCROPS site. All aspects of the in-person and online learning for WRI 116 are designed to meet the previously specified student learning outcomes. Thus, you cannot neglect either the face-to-face classroom or the online classroom. You will find that we have crafted the individual and group assignments to take advantage of the in-person and online formats. These activities are not necessarily mutually exclusive, for example peer review may be done in an online format to allow time to reflect and offer complete feedback. That same peer review work may also carry over into the classroom to facilitate in-person commentary and discussion.
It is common for scientists to communicate and collaborate across electronic formats. The important stages of science writing (research, revision, publication, and interaction of ideas) are all digital and online, to varying degrees. It is incumbent on the future generation of scientists to know how to navigate effectively through digital and hardcopy formats.
There are some activities, such as collecting research, that are most amenable to an online format. Other activities, like oral presentations, are best accomplished live and in-person. Through our hybrid classroom model, we are able to take advantage of the ‘best of both worlds’ and incorporate the online classroom with our traditional classroom setting.
In respecting each other’s opinions, we will cultivate a classroom environment that fosters communal learning. Accordingly, please turn off your cell phones, keep off the Internet (unless instructed otherwise), stay focused on class discussions and activities, and recognize that your peers are also your partners in this learning community. You are required to bring a copy of the assigned reading that you have annotated for each class. If you choose to use a digital copy, bring your laptop and make sure that you have already annotated the reading.
CLASS PARTICIPATION
Please come to class prepared to share your ideas. Be assured that no question is necessarily a bad one, and that we need to ask questions to learn. Because this course subscribes to a workshop format, you cannot satisfy its requirements unless you attend regularly, are on time, and meet weekly online participation requirements. Your contributions shape your and other’s learning, so participation is 15% of your final grade. To this end, your instructor will keep track of attendance, and you will lose participation points for each absence that exceeds the allowable four unexcused absences. You are required to attend on time, in person, three days a week, and attend our online class activities each week between Thursday and Sunday. If you miss a class, it is your responsibility on your own time to find out what you’ve missed. It is especially important that you attend class for Workshop days (which will sometimes occur online), since your writing partner(s) will be depending on your feedback (on the quality of which you will also be graded).
Class participation will also entail peer review, computing exercises, as well as virtual participation on our course site via UCMCROPS (see https://ucmcrops.ucmerced.edu/portal).
Online Class Participation
You are probably wondering how you “attend” online class. You are expected to spend 1 hour doing class activities online each week, and keep in mind that this is in addition to the 2 hours of prep work for each hour of class. So, from Thursday to Sunday you can expect to do 3 hours of class work.
There are three important things to remember each time you attend class online. First, there are still important deadlines that must be adhered to. Our online class meets between Thursday and Sunday each week. You should not wait until 11:57pm on Sunday night to try and post your weekly participation and other assignments. Every online post is time-stamped and no late assignments can be accepted.
Second, you need to read and respond substantively to online class discussion forums. The main way that you demonstrate attendance in an online class is to make posts and interact with your classmates online in the appropriate forums. A substantive response is typically around 100-200 words.
Lastly, the nature of your online participation is also important. You must be participating in the right amounts and ways so that your contributions to online discussions are building on what has already been said and contributing something new to the discussion. It is not enough to say “I agree” or “I do not think that is true”. You need to use the conventions of written English (including spell checking), a respectful tone, and be specific and substantive in your posts. The quality of your online participation, then, is just as important as the number of posts you make. More details about specific online assignments are provided in the Appendix.
INSTRUCTOR AVAILABILITY
There are three primary ways to contact me with questions regarding your coursework or assignments: (1) in-person during class, (2) in-person during my office hours, and (3) in the online Discussion Forum “Questions” thread or online on this PB works page comment box. Generally, if you have a question about an assignment, your peers will also benefit from the answer to your question. I will usually respond to questions sent to the Discussion Forum or PBWorks page within 48 hours of your posting. You should start a new thread within the “Questions” forum for each new question.
If you have questions regarding your personal grade or other private matters regarding your coursework, or if you want to report an excused absence, you should contact me in-person during office hours or online via email to my personal email account: skahlert@ucmerced.edu. I will make every effort to respond to emails within 48 hours of receipt. When sending emails, be sure to use a formal format including: appropriate subject, proper salutation, complete sentences, and conventional English.
ACADEMIC INTEGRITY
Plagiarism is an issue that is as complicated as linguistic expression is nuanced. For our purposes, plagiarism entails representing another’s work as your own. Note that plagiarism includes:
• submitting work that is done in part by someone else
• paraphrasing or summarizing any source without referencing it
• copying any source without using quotation marks or block indentation
In sum, if you submit your own work with all outside sources or ideas properly documented, you will have maintained academic honesty. If you have any questions about academic honesty, please feel encouraged to ask me or to consult www.library.ucla.edu/bruinsuccess, an interactive guide to avoiding plagiarism concerns. During the first week of class, we will discuss UC Merced’s Academic Honesty Policy. Please refer to the appendix in Joseph Williams, Style: Lessons in Clarity and Grace, “Avoiding the Appearance of Plagiarism.”
TIME MANAGEMENT
For each hour of class, you should anticipate doing at least two hours of “homework.” Writing and thinking are processes, so dedicate some time each day to this course. Avoid procrastination. Although we will cover some study skills in class, ask your instructor about good scholarly habits.
With this being a hybrid course, one unit of class time will be conducted online. This class-time will is task-oriented and asynchronous. Bear in mind that as with face to face units of class-time, this one unit of online work includes an additional two hours of associated “homework.”
WRITING RESOURCES
If you would like further help with your writing—whether you’re experiencing difficulties or polishing up an essay—sign up for free consultations at the Student Advising and Learning Center (SALC) in Kolligian Library 172 (visit the center online at http://learning.ucmerced.edu). We also encourage you to come to office hours with any questions you have about assignments, to get feedback on your writing, or to discuss your progress in the course. If you cannot attend office hours, we can schedule an appointment for another time.
MATERIALS (you must have a copy of the reading with you in class)
1. Textbooks
Rebecca Skloot, The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks
Penrose, Ann and Steven Katz, eds. Writing in the Sciences (2010)
Joseph Williams, Style: Lessons in Clarity and Grace (2009)
2. Online Readings (as assigned and posted to UCMCROPS) and Word Press Blog page.
3. A comprehensive dictionary and thesaurus or use of an online dictionary. The Oxford English Dictionary is available online via the Library. You need to install the VPN Client on your computer to use this and other library resources off campus.
Comments (Show all 92)
Gayane Hovhannisyan said
at 12:17 pm on May 30, 2011
cool thanks =)
skahlert@ucmerced.edu said
at 1:20 pm on May 30, 2011
You rock, Michael!
Amanda Pinheiro said
at 4:58 pm on May 31, 2011
Is there anyone else who is having problems getting onto the AAMC website to try and look at the medical school website and hopefully find an admissions essay? I keep getting an error saying "unsupported browser", even though I have tried using Google Chrome, FireFox, and Explorer...
Elizabeth Rodriguez said
at 8:04 pm on May 31, 2011
Hi Amanda,
I just went to the AMCAS from Google, and I didn't have a problem using it. It's connected to the AAMC website so maybe that can help you. I tried looking for a personal statement essay, but didn't have luck either. I mainly found information on how to apply, and the section for the essay was made up. It wasn't really helpful as an example of an admissions essay.
Michael Villegas said
at 11:52 pm on May 31, 2011
ugh.. cant find it either... what to do, what to do?
skahlert@ucmerced.edu said
at 6:55 am on Jun 1, 2011
Hi Elizabeth
Could you post how you got to the personal statement information you mention above? Remember, the essay directions will tell you what the school wants rather than give you directions on how to write it. If the directions are short, just copy and paste them in a comments box. Good work, all!
Anh Vo said
at 5:41 pm on Jun 1, 2011
Here are some prompts that I found
Writing Prompts for your Personal Statement:
Personal Statement Prompts: Please indicate your topic by selection the appropriate prompt.
• Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.
• Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.
• Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.
• Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work (as in art, music, science, etc.) that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.
• A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life experiences adds much to the educational mix. Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you
.• Tell us about an idea or an experience you have had that you find intellectually engaging.
• Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate – and us – know you better.
• Tell us what makes Stanford a good place for you?
• Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.
• Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?
skahlert@ucmerced.edu said
at 6:09 pm on Jun 1, 2011
Good work, Anh! Were these for graduate or undergraduate admissions? The "roommate" prompt makes me think they are undergrad prompts.
Anh Vo said
at 9:27 pm on Jun 1, 2011
Hi Professor Kahlert,
I am not sure these prompts for undergrad or graduate school, but I hope these prompts might point out some direction for us to decide what we want to write about in the personal statement.
skahlert@ucmerced.edu said
at 6:30 am on Jun 2, 2011
It's a good place to start, Anh, but their generality leads me to think that they are undergraduate prompts. Grad prompts are usually a lot more focused and professional. Go back to some of the models Leslie gave you yesterday.
Anh Vo said
at 11:22 am on Jun 2, 2011
Thanks Professor Kahlert
Amanda Pinheiro said
at 8:49 pm on Jun 3, 2011
Is there something wrong with the blog site? It says that I posted on June 4, 2001 at 3:47 am; when its really June 3 at 8:50pm.
skahlert@ucmerced.edu said
at 7:05 am on Jun 4, 2011
Not to worry, Amanda. We'll go with the stated dates until I can figure out how to change them.
Kenn Speer said
at 7:37 pm on Jun 5, 2011
we need to bring our labtops tomorow, right?
skahlert@ucmerced.edu said
at 7:02 am on Jun 6, 2011
All, please bring your laptops today! Thanks for the reminder Kenn.
Tyler Carr said
at 1:00 pm on Jun 6, 2011
"Exercise 1.2 1 and 2 page 13 WS Third Edition Consider the public reaction to Pons’ and Fleichman’s work on cold fusion. What is the public reaction to Hela cells? How is it different from the Lacks family response? What defines scientific literacy? Currently, how would you rate the scientific literacy of the American public? What are the complicating factors? What are some potential solutions?"
Hi Shirley, I am trying to do the blog for this week. Do you want us to do exercise 1.2 from the book and talk about the Henrietta questions underneath? Or are those two different things and you want us to only do the Henrietta questions? The prompt is not very clear to me.
skahlert@ucmerced.edu said
at 7:34 am on Jun 7, 2011
Hi Tyler
Sorry for the lck of clarity. Let's try again. Do the exercise in the book, yes. Then finish the HL questions. One of the big questions in The Immortal Life is the Lacks' family's lack of understanding of HeLa cells, and at one level the book is the journey of how they came to understand their mother's priceless contribution to science and medicine. So in one sense, the book is the story of journey to scientific literacy. So to clarify the prompt, I'd like you to do the exercise, then apply some of what you discovered to the Immortal Life. The questions are prompts and meant only as guidelines. Thanks for being a good student!
Saema Adeeb said
at 11:34 am on Jun 7, 2011
Which room are we meeting in tomorrow? I know it's in the Library, on the Third Floor, but do we know which room? KL360 Library Instruction Room?
http://tinyurl.com/KL3rdFloor
skahlert@ucmerced.edu said
at 11:41 am on Jun 7, 2011
Meet in KL 371 tomorrow for the library tour!
Saema Adeeb said
at 11:56 am on Jun 7, 2011
Thank you!
Kenn Speer said
at 4:41 pm on Jun 19, 2011
do we need to haul our laptops to class for our presentations, or will one be available?
skahlert@ucmerced.edu said
at 6:13 am on Jun 20, 2011
You need to create a self-sufficient presentation on your own laptop, please! Sometimes groups put all of their presentations on one laptop to create a better flow between presentations, especially for the second presentation. Don't count on me!
Amabel Chow said
at 8:11 pm on Jun 26, 2011
Does anyone know when our PS final drafts are due? I know that our second TELA drafts are due tomorrow.
Gayane Hovhannisyan said
at 5:11 pm on Jun 28, 2011
How do we turn in our tela? Turnitin.com doesn't show that I am enrolled in Writing 116 and to sign in they want username and password for the class. Thank you for the help.
Amanda Pinheiro said
at 11:24 am on Jun 29, 2011
4103136 heres the class id for turn it in
jdehart@ucmerced.edu said
at 4:13 pm on Jun 29, 2011
Professor, is it okay to have an article for the annotated bibliographies that doesnt follow the IMRAD form? I found one that is on the subject I am writing about, but it is more of an article describing the topics and further research that can come out of it
Jennifer Harmon said
at 4:54 pm on Jul 4, 2011
I used the class ID that you posted, Amanda, but I can't get it to work. Did it work for you? The password is "student", correct?
Elizabeth Rodriguez said
at 1:05 am on Jul 5, 2011
I used the ID Amanda gave, I just copied and pasted it. The password is student, and it worked for me.
Saema Adeeb said
at 11:15 am on Jul 5, 2011
Is Discussion Blog #6 for this week up yet?
Jason Le said
at 11:15 pm on Jul 7, 2011
I'm a little confused about the blogs now. Are we on blog #6 or #7 now? According to the calendar we should be on #7 but I don't recall doing #6 and the mwp only shows up to #5.
jdehart@ucmerced.edu said
at 11:57 pm on Jul 7, 2011
Do we not have a blog due this week?
Gayane Hovhannisyan said
at 5:53 pm on Jul 14, 2011
Just a heads up to everyone UC Merced Crops is going to be down for maintenance during FINALS week from Friday at 9pm and will last all of Saturday and the server will be back up on Sunday. In other words get everything that you need uploaded before Friday because if you have to do it on Sunday the server will crash and no one will be able to get their files uploaded. =( Thank You.
Gayane Hovhannisyan said
at 10:34 pm on Jul 14, 2011
Please DISREGARD my previous message thankfully the scheduled maintenance for crops was postponed till the Friday after the summer session is over! so we get our three days back to work on e-portfolio yay.
Jennifer Harmon said
at 9:47 am on Jul 15, 2011
Are you sure it was postponed? I have not received anything about a postpone -- but I do have the original message that was sent yesterday. "UCMCROPS will undergo database maintenance this weekend. The outage is expected to last from 9pm Friday, July 15th, through 9am Saturday, July 16th."
Jennifer Harmon said
at 12:39 pm on Jul 15, 2011
I take that back. It says on CROPS it is postponed until after the semester.
jdehart@ucmerced.edu said
at 11:31 am on Jul 17, 2011
Hi professor kahlert. I'm having somewhat of a hard time writing some of the cover letters. Is it okay to use "I" and "my" when necessary as we are essentially talking about ourselves and our writing? I dont know how to avoid using them since I feel it seems necessary to make my writing clear.
Gayane Hovhannisyan said
at 8:35 pm on Jul 18, 2011
Is anyone having issues uploading your cover letters? It took me about 4 hours to just try and fix 2 of my cover letters and upload.
Amanda Pinheiro said
at 12:43 am on Jul 19, 2011
is anyone else having problems uploading the cover note? its says error html so i had to upload the cover notes as an artifact....
Elizabeth Rodriguez said
at 9:56 am on Jul 19, 2011
Did you copy and paste from word by clicking the little clipboard with a smaller word picture after you click to upload the cover note? Once the small box pops up paste the work on there, and make sure you have both boxes at the bottom left corner checked. It usually didn't work for me the first time but do the same thing and paste it again, but remember to check both boxes off. Hope this helps :-)
Jason Le said
at 10:19 am on Jul 19, 2011
I found that clicking the "paste as plain text" works best. It's a bit tedious to do but I don't get pop up errors. First copy and paste your word document to a "notepad" and then copy and paste from the notepad to the box
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